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Thank You Letter - First-Time Donor

Personalized thank-you for first-time donors under $100

The Prompt

The Prompt

Draft a personalized first-time donor thank-you letter for [ORGANIZATION NAME] to send within 48 hours of [DONOR NAME]’s gift.

The letter should:
- Be 150-250 words and feel human, warm, and concise.
- Use [TONE]: FORMAL (polished, respectful), WARM (friendly, heartfelt), or CASUAL (conversational, approachable). Default: WARM.
- Open with the donor’s name and clear acknowledgment of the gift: “[DONOR NAME], thank you for your gift of [AMOUNT] received on [DATE RECEIVED].”
- Include a one-line mission anchor: “[ORGANIZATION NAME] [MISSION ONE-LINER].”
- Specify concrete impact tied to the gift and program: “[PROGRAM/IMPACT AREA]” and a proof point ([IMPACT PROOF POINT]). If no data is provided, describe qualitative impact without inventing numbers. Example: “Your gift helps a new mom meet with a lactation counselor this week.”
- Welcome them as a first-time supporter and, if known, reference context: “[HOW THEY CAME TO US: event/peer-to-peer/online].”
- Keep donor-centric language (aim for a ‘you’ to ‘we’ ratio of ~2:1), simple sentences, and 6th–8th grade readability.
- Avoid asks for another gift; you may include one non-monetary next step (choose one): invite to [TOUR/NEWSLETTER/SOCIAL HANDLE/UPCOMING VOLUNTEER ORIENTATION].
- Use this order: greeting; warm thanks + gift details; mission anchor; impact statement; welcome line; brief human detail/story image; gentle non-ask next step; sincere closing; signature.
- Include an optional acknowledgment line if needed: “Your contribution is tax-deductible; no goods or services were provided.” [ADJUST FOR YOUR JURISDICTION]
- End with a real sign-off from leadership: [SIGNER NAME], [TITLE], [DIRECT CONTACT INFO]. Optional P.S. reinforcing impact or the non-ask next step.
- If any bracketed detail is unknown, omit that sentence rather than guessing.

Quality matters: Be specific, human, and sincere. Avoid clichés (“on behalf of…,” “we couldn’t do it without you”), jargon, acronyms without explanation, emojis, or multiple exclamation points. The goal is to make the donor feel seen, know their impact, and feel welcomed—without being asked for more.

How to Customize

  1. Replace all [BRACKETED] fields with your specific information
  2. Adjust tone and length as needed for your audience
  3. Review and personalize before using

Pro Tips

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  2. Always review AI output for accuracy and appropriateness
  3. Customize outputs to match your organization’s voice and brand

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Example Outputs

Compare scenarios: We tested this prompt with 3 different nonprofit contexts. Each scenario shows outputs from GPT-5, Claude, and Gemini. Select a model above each scenario to compare.

Small Community Org

Small, volunteer-driven arts nonprofit in Southwest Detroit providing free after-school classes for neighborhood youth; first-time donor is a new resident who gave online after a local spring supplies appeal.

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[AMOUNT]:50
[ORGANIZATION NAME]:Southwest Detroit ArtWorks
[FORMAL/WARM/CASUAL]:WARM
[CAMPAIGN NAME]:Spring Studio Supplies Appeal
[SIGNER NAME and TITLE]:Maya Ortiz, Executive Director

Dear [Donor Name],

Thank you so much for your first gift of $50 to Southwest Detroit ArtWorks through our Spring Studio Supplies Appeal. We’re grateful you chose to stand with our young artists, and we’re happy to welcome you into our creative community.

Your $50 provides the essentials that keep our studios humming: a new sketchbook and brush set for a teen in our after-school program, plus acrylics and canvas panels for a Saturday class. These simple tools open doors—helping students practice technique, explore ideas, and find their voice in a supportive space.

Because of you, a ninth grader can arrive to class with materials that are truly theirs, ready to try, revise, and try again. We see the difference in the quiet confidence that grows when they complete a first print, a vibrant painting, or a coil pot they can’t wait to show their family.

We’d love to keep you connected to the art you’ve made possible. If you’d like, follow us on social media for studio snapshots and student spotlights, or join our email newsletter through our website to hear about upcoming showcases and open studio nights. You’re part of this story now, and we’re excited to share what you’ve helped set in motion.

Thank you again for believing in our young artists and the creative energy of Southwest Detroit. We’re honored to have you with us.

With gratitude,

Maya Ortiz Executive Director Southwest Detroit ArtWorks

Generated: Nov 1, 20251220 tokens$0.0165 cost
AI Evaluation Details (Score: 8.8/10)
Reasoning:

This is a strong, well-crafted thank-you letter that successfully balances warmth with professionalism. It fulfills all prompt requirements while maintaining an authentic voice appropriate for a small community arts organization. The specific impact details are concrete and compelling, and the letter avoids transactional language while genuinely welcoming the donor into the community.

Strengths:
  • Excellent specific impact statement that breaks down exactly what $50 provides (sketchbook, brush set, acrylics, canvas panels) in concrete, tangible terms
  • Strong emotional storytelling in the third paragraph about the ninth grader and 'quiet confidence' that humanizes impact without being overwrought
  • Perfect execution of the 'subtle invitation' requirement—offers multiple connection points (social media, newsletter, showcases) without being pushy
  • Appropriate warm tone throughout with phrases like 'studios humming' and 'creative energy' that reflect the arts mission authentically
  • Good length at approximately 250 words, fitting the 200-300 word requirement
  • Avoids making another ask as instructed, keeping focus entirely on gratitude and community-building
Weaknesses:
  • Minor placeholder issue: '[Donor Name]' should ideally be flagged more clearly as a merge field in instructions for the user
  • The phrase 'the art you've made possible' in paragraph 4 is slightly abstract—could be more concrete given the strong specificity elsewhere

Mid-Size Professional Org

Regional legal aid nonprofit serving rural Appalachian communities with civil legal services; first-time donor contributed via a workplace giving platform during a matching challenge.

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[AMOUNT]:250
[ORGANIZATION NAME]:Appalachian Justice Collective
[FORMAL/WARM/CASUAL]:FORMAL
[CAMPAIGN NAME]:Access to Justice Matching Challenge
[SIGNER NAME and TITLE]:Rachel Kim, Director of Development

Dear [Donor Name],

Thank you for your generous first-time gift of $250 to Appalachian Justice Collective. Because you gave through our Access to Justice Matching Challenge, your contribution is being matched dollar-for-dollar, doubling its immediate reach for neighbors across the region.

Your support translates into tangible help: - Your $50 provides a confidential intake and know-your-rights consultation for a client facing eviction or wage theft. - Your $100 helps cover court filing fees and document preparation for an expungement or protective order. - Your $250 underwrites an evening of our traveling legal clinic in a rural county, where volunteer attorneys meet clients who would otherwise go without counsel.

By joining our community, you are helping ensure that where a person lives—or what they earn—does not determine whether they can assert their rights. We are grateful for your trust, and we will steward your gift with care and transparency.

We would be honored to keep you apprised of the impact you make. Please connect with us on social media and consider subscribing to our monthly newsletter via our website, where we share client stories, program updates, and opportunities to learn more about civil legal needs in Appalachia.

On behalf of our staff, volunteers, and clients, thank you for standing with us. Welcome to the Appalachian Justice Collective community.

With sincere appreciation,

Rachel Kim Director of Development

Generated: Nov 1, 20252224 tokens$0.0315 cost
AI Evaluation Details (Score: 8.4/10)
Reasoning:

This is a strong, professional thank-you letter that effectively balances formality with warmth. It successfully conveys impact through specific examples and welcomes the donor into community. The breakdown of gift impact is particularly well-executed, though the math presentation could be slightly confusing since the donor gave $250, not increments.

Strengths:
  • Excellent formal tone that remains warm and personal, appropriate for legal aid sector
  • Specific, concrete impact examples that clearly show how donations translate to services
  • Strong acknowledgment of the matching challenge context, making the donor feel their timing mattered
  • Natural, non-pushy invitation to stay connected through multiple channels
  • Professional structure and length (approximately 230 words, within range)
  • Effective community-building language ('welcome to,' 'standing with us')
  • Avoids making another ask while maintaining engagement focus
Weaknesses:
  • The impact breakdown ($50, $100, $250) could confuse donors since it's not clear these are examples rather than how their specific $250 was allocated
  • Missing personalized salutation placeholder is noted but '[Donor Name]' format is correct
  • The phrase 'steward your gift with care and transparency' is somewhat generic nonprofit language
  • Could have been slightly more specific about what the newsletter or social media contains to increase conversion

Large Established Org

National literacy organization with programs in urban and rural school districts across the U.S.; first-time donor gave online during a back-to-school appeal.

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[AMOUNT]:100
[ORGANIZATION NAME]:United Literacy Initiative
[FORMAL/WARM/CASUAL]:CASUAL
[CAMPAIGN NAME]:Back-to-School Reading Fund
[SIGNER NAME and TITLE]:Aisha Bennett, Chief Executive Officer

Dear Friend,

Thank you for making your first gift of $100 to United Literacy Initiative through our Back-to-School Reading Fund. We’re so grateful you chose to stand with young readers right now.

Here’s what your support does, in real terms: Your $50 provides a take-home reading kit—two age-appropriate books, a mini activity journal, and simple tips for families to read together. Your $100 puts those kits into the hands of two students who are just starting to build confidence, and helps us get them matched with a volunteer tutor as the school year begins.

Because of you, a child will open a book that feels like it was written just for them—and a caregiver will have the tools to make reading a happy, daily habit. That’s the kind of steady, local change that adds up.

As a first-time donor, you’re now part of our United Literacy community. We’d love to keep you in the loop with quick updates, photos from classrooms, and stories from families. If you’re up for it, follow us on social media or sign up for our newsletter on our website—no pressure, just a simple way to see your impact at work.

Thanks again for believing in this work and in the kids we serve. We’re glad you’re here.

With gratitude,

Aisha Bennett Chief Executive Officer

Generated: Nov 1, 20252417 tokens$0.0344 cost
AI Evaluation Details (Score: 8.2/10)
Reasoning:

This is a strong, authentic letter that successfully balances warmth with professionalism. The casual tone feels natural and the impact description is concrete and compelling. However, there's a mathematical error in the impact statement that would need correction before use.

Strengths:
  • Excellent casual tone that feels genuine and conversational without being unprofessional ('We're glad you're here,' 'no pressure')
  • Concrete, specific impact description that breaks down exactly what $100 provides in tangible terms
  • Strong community-building language that welcomes the donor without being transactional
  • Effective subtle invitation to stay connected with low-pressure framing
  • Good length at approximately 230 words, within the 200-300 range
  • Avoids making another ask and focuses purely on gratitude and impact
Weaknesses:
  • Mathematical error: states 'Your $50 provides...' then 'Your $100 puts those kits into the hands of two students' - this is confusing because the donor gave $100, not $50, making the breakdown awkward
  • The phrase 'Dear Friend' is generic when personalization would be expected in a real donor letter
  • Minor: 'steady, local change' seems slightly inconsistent for a national organization, though it could refer to local implementation

Test Summary: Generated Nov 1, 20253 scenarios • 9 total outputs • Average quality score: 8.33/10 • Total validation cost: $0.0981